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Tuesday, November 18, 2008
US Francais II
Qu'est-ce que vous pensez des films de vos copains? Postez, s'il vous plait, des suggestions et de l'encouragement par rapport aux travaux de vos collegues ici.
Sarah, Chris, et Elle: J'aime vos actualites des temps. Votre film est tres bon, maugre "le primiere etat." Je pense que les pretres n'ont pas porter les robes. Sarah, Monique, Jean-Jacques, et Fearghus: J'aime vos armes et batailles! Le decapitation et "effects" sont chouette! Peut-etre Maximlian Robespierre dois porter un autre jacquette que un jacquette "lifeguard"... Kenneth, Kieran, Danny, Natasa: Brilliante! Pur genie. Je pense que Monsieur Guillotine et Robespierre sont etrange pour porter seulment UNE tenue pour quatre-vingt-et-un jours.
sarah, monique, jean-jacques, et fearghus: c'est tres bon! C'est drole aussi. La musique dans le film est amusant. Sarah, Chris, et Elle: je suis dans cette film en peu. j'aime cette film et q'est-ce q'elle fait avec la parapluie. Perhaps they could have figured out how to cut scenes but good job! :) Kenneth, Kieran, Danny, Natasa: Kenneth est un bon acteur! Pauvre Natasa... parce que elle est morte. J'aime quand ils fait tout les jours comme 'jour quatre-vingt-et-un'.
Sarah Chris and Elle: I thought was very clever because you used the volleyball court as the setting, even though it was a "Tennis Court oath." My suggestion is that whoever films should try to keep the camera a bit more steady.
Sarah, Monique, Jean-Jacques, and Fearghas: I thought your use of hair-doos to be different characters really helped set the scene, because people during that time had some pretty crazy hair-doos. My suggestion is to make some of the scenes a bit more realistic, the fight scene in particular.
David, Zoe, Janine, and Rachel: I really liked the overall video. The random scenes such as when you were dancing like Michael Jackson was pretty funny, but not very relevant, or possible. My suggestion is to make sure other people don't interrupt your filming. That also made it pretty funny, but detracted from the film.
David, Zoe, Janine, and Rachel: your video was truly hilarious, but in agreeing with what Danny said many of the scenes were not at all relevent, now there is a very fine line between comic content adding to a video and that same content detracting from the video simply in its amount. I felt that the video was not particullary relevent in general but I was laughing through out, you just need to find a balance. A little more action a little less comedy and it will be perfect. I very muched enjoyed the dancing, and I thought that the bloogers were a good touch, but some of the scenes that were added into the final film probobly should have been resind to that catogory. Some scenes were interupted by off camera activity, and I suggest that for the future the actor should not react to that activity, for example on at least one occasion I heard one of your actors yelling at an offstage party about something that I didn't even know was happening, so actors stay in the moment. These may seem like alot of corrections but just remeber I was peeing myself when I saw it, it was so funny. Over all I give it a thumbs up! 1/3
Jean-Jacques, Sarah, Fearghas, et Monique: C'est magnifique. J'ai aimé le << les difficultés techniques>> et les belles coiffures. Ma seule suggestion est parler plus fort.
Elle, Chris, et Sarah: C'est vraiment chouette. J'ai aimé vos actualites des temps aussi et le conflit du court de volley. Peut-être vous gardez le 'flip' (can't do French quotes here because the blogspot thinks it's html) plus stable.
Kenneth, Kieran, Natasa, et Danny: Monsieur Guillotine a été hilarant. J'aime les idées pour la guillotine et la guillotine lui-même. Peut-être vous parler plus fort aussi.
llegirlSarah, Monica, John-Jack and Feargus The music and the hair were very funny.... it was very amusing to watch but more realistic scenes would've been nice.
Rachel, David, Zoe, Janine Your film was hilarious and i loved watching it. However it was not very historically accurate.
Kenneth, Natasa, Danny, Keiran] I loved every minute of your. It was very funny and historically accurate. It would've been nice though if everyone had lines in the movie.
Kenneth, Kieran, Danny, Natasa: good job! i loved the way they came up with the guillotine. i would've rather used the elephant one!
Sarah, Monique, Jean-JAQUES, AND FEARGHUS: the caps lock just locked on those words, but whatever. very good job, i thought the hair styles were amazing!!
David, Zoe, Janine, and Rachel: great video, wonderful dancing, and i love the cooking! great job!
Cher Sarah, Chris et Elle: J'aime beacoup votre idees et l'action dans le film.C'est tres drole! Beaucoup le temps, Il a ete difficulte comprende que est-ce que vous dit, mais j'aime les histoires!
Cher David, Zoe, Janine, et Rachel: Ton projet a ete tres drole et amusant! J'aime beacoup la mere de David dans le film. Mais je pense que le "Great Fear" n'est pas dans ta film beacoup. J'aime beacoup le cuisine scene!
Cher Kenneth, Natasa, Danny et Kieran: Ton projet et tres facille de comprende. Le guillotine est tres interresant maintentant, comme ton projet. Je pense que beacoup de peuple dans ton project doivent parler beacoup. Le dernier scene a ete tres drole, j'aime le papier que c'est
Sarah, Monique, Jean-Jacques, and Fearghas I thought that editing was done very well, and I like the music alot, also I love the hair based costume changes, but I thought some of the camera work was a little shakey at times and the fight scene was also not quite as realistic as i think your group could have pulled off (you cannot slide a rapier though some one's skull), another very small thing was I thought that the commander of the Bastille should have been given a historically accurate name instead of Jerome. These are all very nitpicking things and overal with the editing and pronucation I thought the video was superb. very good job 2/3
Sarah Chris and Elle: I thought that the idea was spot on, I love the Mrs. Vandertramp thing and I also adorded the weather report, excelent lighting. Beautiful accents, try not to read off the script so much though and hold the camera a bit steadier. I love how it was in a volley ball court instead of a teniis ball court. I enjoyed the subtitles. I think that that little accidental bit in english should have been cut out thought, and when at the end you said 1st estate i think you meant 2nd estate because the 1st estate was the clergy the 2nd estate was the nobilities. Very good overall, just a few small problems 3/3
Sarah, Monique, Jean-Jacque, et Fearghus: Ton film est tres bon mais je pense qu'il n'ai pas juste pour Fearghus. Fearghus est une celebrite. Je pense qu'il Fearghus n'ai pas juste temps dans ton film. Sarah, Chris, et Elle: Ton film est tres bon aussi mais je pense qu'il le technique de filmer n'est pas parfait; j'ai un mal de tete. Kenneth, Kieran, Danny, and Natasa, ton film est tres bon aussi mais je pense qu'il le 'guillotine' n'est pas dans le balance avec le actualite. J'aime le creuteur idee de ecrir beacoup de l'idee 'guillotine'. J'aim d'hamburger.
15 comments:
Sarah, Chris, et Elle:
J'aime vos actualites des temps. Votre film est tres bon, maugre "le primiere etat." Je pense que les pretres n'ont pas porter les robes.
Sarah, Monique, Jean-Jacques, et Fearghus:
J'aime vos armes et batailles! Le decapitation et "effects" sont chouette! Peut-etre Maximlian Robespierre dois porter un autre jacquette que un jacquette "lifeguard"...
Kenneth, Kieran, Danny, Natasa:
Brilliante! Pur genie. Je pense que Monsieur Guillotine et Robespierre sont etrange pour porter seulment UNE tenue pour quatre-vingt-et-un jours.
sarah, monique, jean-jacques, et fearghus: c'est tres bon! C'est drole aussi. La musique dans le film est amusant.
Sarah, Chris, et Elle: je suis dans cette film en peu. j'aime cette film et q'est-ce q'elle fait avec la parapluie. Perhaps they could have figured out how to cut scenes but good job! :)
Kenneth, Kieran, Danny, Natasa: Kenneth est un bon acteur! Pauvre Natasa... parce que elle est morte. J'aime quand ils fait tout les jours comme 'jour quatre-vingt-et-un'.
Sarah Chris and Elle: I thought was very clever because you used the volleyball court as the setting, even though it was a "Tennis Court oath." My suggestion is that whoever films should try to keep the camera a bit more steady.
Sarah, Monique, Jean-Jacques, and Fearghas: I thought your use of hair-doos to be different characters really helped set the scene, because people during that time had some pretty crazy hair-doos. My suggestion is to make some of the scenes a bit more realistic, the fight scene in particular.
David, Zoe, Janine, and Rachel: I really liked the overall video. The random scenes such as when you were dancing like Michael Jackson was pretty funny, but not very relevant, or possible. My suggestion is to make sure other people don't interrupt your filming. That also made it pretty funny, but detracted from the film.
David, Zoe, Janine, and Rachel: your video was truly hilarious, but in agreeing with what Danny said many of the scenes were not at all relevent, now there is a very fine line between comic content adding to a video and that same content detracting from the video simply in its amount. I felt that the video was not particullary relevent in general but I was laughing through out, you just need to find a balance. A little more action a little less comedy and it will be perfect. I very muched enjoyed the dancing, and I thought that the bloogers were a good touch, but some of the scenes that were added into the final film probobly should have been resind to that catogory. Some scenes were interupted by off camera activity, and I suggest that for the future the actor should not react to that activity, for example on at least one occasion I heard one of your actors yelling at an offstage party about something that I didn't even know was happening, so actors stay in the moment. These may seem like alot of corrections but just remeber I was peeing myself when I saw it, it was so funny. Over all I give it a thumbs up!
1/3
Jean-Jacques, Sarah, Fearghas, et Monique: C'est magnifique. J'ai aimé le << les difficultés techniques>> et les belles coiffures. Ma seule suggestion est parler plus fort.
Elle, Chris, et Sarah: C'est vraiment chouette. J'ai aimé vos actualites des temps aussi et le conflit du court de volley. Peut-être vous gardez le 'flip' (can't do French quotes here because the blogspot thinks it's html) plus stable.
Kenneth, Kieran, Natasa, et Danny: Monsieur Guillotine a été hilarant. J'aime les idées pour la guillotine et la guillotine lui-même. Peut-être vous parler plus fort aussi.
llegirlSarah, Monica, John-Jack and Feargus
The music and the hair were very funny.... it was very amusing to watch but more realistic scenes would've been nice.
Rachel, David, Zoe, Janine
Your film was hilarious and i loved watching it. However it was not very historically accurate.
Kenneth, Natasa, Danny, Keiran]
I loved every minute of your. It was very funny and historically accurate. It would've been nice though if everyone had lines in the movie.
that was elle by the way
Kenneth, Kieran, Danny, Natasa:
good job! i loved the way they came up with the guillotine. i would've rather used the elephant one!
Sarah, Monique, Jean-JAQUES, AND FEARGHUS:
the caps lock just locked on those words, but whatever. very good job, i thought the hair styles were amazing!!
David, Zoe, Janine, and Rachel: great video, wonderful dancing, and i love the cooking! great job!
chris (just in case the username doesnt work)
Cher Sarah, Chris et Elle:
J'aime beacoup votre idees et l'action dans le film.C'est tres drole! Beaucoup le temps, Il a ete difficulte comprende que est-ce que vous dit, mais j'aime les histoires!
Cher David, Zoe, Janine, et Rachel: Ton projet a ete tres drole et amusant! J'aime beacoup la mere de David dans le film. Mais je pense que le "Great Fear" n'est pas dans ta film beacoup. J'aime beacoup le cuisine scene!
Cher Kenneth, Natasa, Danny et Kieran: Ton projet et tres facille de comprende. Le guillotine est tres interresant maintentant, comme ton projet. Je pense que beacoup de peuple dans ton project doivent parler beacoup. Le dernier scene a ete tres drole, j'aime le papier que c'est
-MONIQUE PASTEUR
Sarah, Monique, Jean-Jacques, and Fearghas
I thought that editing was done very well, and I like the music alot, also I love the hair based costume changes, but I thought some of the camera work was a little shakey at times and the fight scene was also not quite as realistic as i think your group could have pulled off (you cannot slide a rapier though some one's skull), another very small thing was I thought that the commander of the Bastille should have been given a historically accurate name instead of Jerome. These are all very nitpicking things and overal with the editing and pronucation I thought the video was superb. very good job
2/3
Sarah Chris and Elle:
I thought that the idea was spot on, I love the Mrs. Vandertramp thing and I also adorded the weather report, excelent lighting. Beautiful accents, try not to read off the script so much though and hold the camera a bit steadier. I love how it was in a volley ball court instead of a teniis ball court. I enjoyed the subtitles. I think that that little accidental bit in english should have been cut out thought, and when at the end you said 1st estate i think you meant 2nd estate because the 1st estate was the clergy the 2nd estate was the nobilities. Very good overall, just a few small problems
3/3
Sarah, Monique, Jean-Jacque, et Fearghus:
Ton film est tres bon mais je pense qu'il n'ai pas juste pour Fearghus. Fearghus est une celebrite. Je pense qu'il Fearghus n'ai pas juste temps dans ton film.
Sarah, Chris, et Elle:
Ton film est tres bon aussi mais je pense qu'il le technique de filmer n'est pas parfait; j'ai un mal de tete.
Kenneth, Kieran, Danny, and Natasa, ton film est tres bon aussi mais je pense qu'il le 'guillotine' n'est pas dans le balance avec le actualite. J'aime le creuteur idee de ecrir beacoup de l'idee 'guillotine'.
J'aim d'hamburger.
Sarah J's Group:
J'aime le temps! C'est une tres bon filme, et j'aime le "Volley" court Oath!
Janine's Group:
J'aime le danse, et j'aime le recipe! Trops bon!
Kenneth's Group:
Monsier Guillotine c'est tres creative! J'aime les idees por le guillotine, et bon travaille!
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